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Friday, March 29, 2019

Pig the Pug's Tragic Accident

WALT: To know how to write newspaper reports

Pig the Pug’s Tragic Accident (Is Trevor the Sausage Dog guilty or innocent?)

On the 23rd of March, 2019, Pig the Pug was pronounced injured as he embraced a tragic accident. Trevor, the sausage dog, was involved, but he hasn’t proven guilty or innocent, yet.

Trevor said “That greedy, selfish and self-centered pug wouldn’t share his toys with me. I was bored, I saw him playing with his toys, so I came up to him and asked him if he could share some of his toys with me.” He added. “He said no, and formed a pyramid of toys and stood on top of it. Before I even realize it, he lost his balance and fell off the window.” Could Trevor be lying?

“Trevor pushed me out of jealousness, I was just being defensive to my toys, then he pushed me off the window.” Pig the Pug cried. “NO I DID NOT!” Trevor protested, right after Pig makes him look guilty. “He’s lying! I didn’t push him off the window. It’s really just karma that pushed him, not me!” Trevor said in despite.

Is it really karma? Or does Trevor just don’t want to look guilty?

2 comments:

  1. Hey Angi,
    I like the way you used rhetorical questions in your news paper report it made me want to keep on reading it. Maybe next time you could make your sentences a bit shorter. But your work was amazing I loved your piece of writing. Keep up this great work.

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    1. Hey Kayla, thanks for commenting, and yes, I will try to make my sentences shorter next time.

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