The Explorer and the creepy tower
There once lived an explorer that has a dream to go to a tall, dark,
and creepy stone tower because he wanted to explore it. So one day,
he thought of going to the tower and experience how it is inside the
creepy place. He got out his wavy cape, his brown hat, his weapons,
in case something goes wrong, he fetched his bag with his food and
all the stuff he needs, and he put his shiny shoes on. When he was
there, he saw pink roses. He smelt the scent of the fresh flowers. He
felt the petals of the roses touching his skin. He heard the wind
blowing and he also heard creepy noises coming out of the tower.
He felt brave and said to himself “I’m going inside, at least it would
be an experience.” He went near the tower. Suddenly, he heard noise
coming from the place.. He felt warm wind touching his skin. So, he
left the tower without saying anything.
and creepy stone tower because he wanted to explore it. So one day,
he thought of going to the tower and experience how it is inside the
creepy place. He got out his wavy cape, his brown hat, his weapons,
in case something goes wrong, he fetched his bag with his food and
all the stuff he needs, and he put his shiny shoes on. When he was
there, he saw pink roses. He smelt the scent of the fresh flowers. He
felt the petals of the roses touching his skin. He heard the wind
blowing and he also heard creepy noises coming out of the tower.
He felt brave and said to himself “I’m going inside, at least it would
be an experience.” He went near the tower. Suddenly, he heard noise
coming from the place.. He felt warm wind touching his skin. So, he
left the tower without saying anything.
Buddy Checked: Nici - Good Job Angie I can’t think of anything that you need to change otherwise good Writing I Loved It.
Hi Angie,
ReplyDeleteGood story! I can't really think of a con.
Story was short but interesting, could you please continue with the story?
Shreya.
Thanks for sharing what you think, Shreya! I will do a part 2 when I have free time! Otherwise, thanks!
DeleteHey Angie.
DeleteThank you for your comment!
Do you have any ideas for part 2?
Hey Shreya! Thanks for the question. I think the part 2 will be about kind of the same thing as this one. But I will add some more stuff into it like he's going back to the tower and he will find out what the tower was before, and why it became haunted.
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